Friday, December 3, 2010

Naughty Mr. Kringle

Here's another project that I've had on the back-burner for a while. It's called "Naughty Mr. Kringle". It basically answers the question:  what does Santa give to the "naughty" girls... Below is a look at some of the script along with the thumbnails:


Naughty Mr. Kringle

page 1

frame 1 
Building with mountain backdrop. Landscape shot. Winter. Night sky with stars and some clouds. 

Twas the night before Christmas, when all through the girl's dorm...
Not a creature was stirring, except...

frame 2
Close-up on one of the windows. Surrounded by dark shadows and snow. No light coming from within...

Well, the dorm was pretty much empty. Everyone was away for the holidays. So of course it was quiet...

frame 3
Medium shot of Julie and Wendy in bed. Julie is closest to the window. she's asleep. Wendy is awake. There is a streak of light from a slightly opened door.

Except for the irritating noise of Julie's snore. Usually it didn't bother Wendy but tonight it kept her awake. Her snoring and her lies.

One hour to midnight. One hour until Christmas! 

Then there was that light peeking through the slightly opened bedroom door. And what was that? A sort of soft jingle of bells...

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page 2

frame 01
Medium shot of Wendy peeking out from the bedroom door. Their window in the background. She has a curious, somewhat worried, expression on her face. 

The soft smell of snow coming from within...? Wendy had to know.

frame 02
Foreground. Santa is sitting on a love seat. He's putting down an empty glass of milk on a little table, next to a plate of cookie crumbs. In the background Wendy is standing nervously. Like a child. Excited and expectant.

WENDY, MY CHILD... COME! I SEE YOU'RE WEARING THE PAJAMAS I BOUGHT YOU.

frame 03
Wendy and Santa embrace. They kiss each other deeply on the mouth. His hands cup both sides of her ass. She's humping on his leg. Christmas tree in the background.

The space between them is a blur. The kiss: age and youth collide. A mix of sweet candy. Cookies and milk. The musk of an older man. The heat of young flesh!

frame 04
Close medium shot. Wendy sitting up on Santa's lap. Her hands frame / hold both sides of his face. she's looking intently into his eyes.

WOW! IT'S AMAZING. EVERY TIME IS LIKE THE FIRST TIME. EVERY KISS IS LIKE THE FIRST KISS. 

frame 05
Wendy rests her head on Santa's chest. In between his big beard and his left shoulder...

DO YOU REMEMBER THE FIRST TIME MY CHILD? 

OF COURSE! EVERYONE WAS ASLEEP! I SNUCK DOWNSTAIRS AND CAUGHT YOU BRINGING TOYS FOR MY YOUNGER BROTHERS BUT, JUST PJS FOR ME! I WAS UPSET. YOU SAID THAT I WAS TOO YOUNG FOR TOYS. YOU SAID THAT IF I'D TRY THE PJS ON YOU WOULD GIVE ME SOMETHING SPECIAL. EXTRA SPECIAL. AT FIRST I WAS NERVOUS. I'D NEVER BEEN NAKED IN FRONT OF A MAN BEFORE. NOT EVEN MY BOYFRIEND! AND YOU JUST SAT THERE. WAITING. I COULD SEE THE LUMP BETWEEN YOUR LEGS. THE PJS FIT NICELY. LOOSE AND SNUG AT THE SAME TIME. THE WAY THEY HUGGED MY BUTT. MADE ME FEEL WARM BETWEEN MY LEGS... THEN YOU TOLD ME TO CRAWL...

SHOW ME MY CHILD. SHOW ME WHAT YOU DID NEXT...

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page 03

frame 01
Wendy is on her knees. Between Santa's legs. Pulling on his belt. Opening it. She's looking up at him expectantly...
LIKE THIS SANTA?

YES... LIKE THAT. REMEMBER? THAT WASN'T THE FIRST TIME YOU DID SOMETHING LIKE THIS. REMEMBER THAT BLACK MAN THAT LIVED NEXT DOOR?

MR. ROGERS! YES! I REMEMBER. I WAS BABY SITTING MY BROTHERS. THEY LOST THEIR BALL IN HIS YARD. I WENT TO GO GET IT...

frame 02

She pulls out his dick. It's thick in her little hands.

WOW! IT'S SO BIG! WILL IT FIT IN MY MOUTH?

THAT'S EXACTLY WHAT YOU SAID WHEN YOU FIRST SAW IT!

AND YOU SAID LICK IT AND IT'LL GET BIGGER STILL....

frame 03
Wendy has head of it inside her mouth. (Use Jersey pic.) Santa is patting her on the head. 

THAT'S A GOOD GIRL. I REMEMBER WHEN YOU WHERE YOUNGER, YOU COULD NOT FIT IT PAST YOUR LIPS. NOW OHHH...!  HOW MUCH YOU'VE GROWN!

frame 04
Santa's hips are rising from the chair. Thrusting his phallus deep into Wendy's mouth and presumably down her throat. She's meeting each thrust with one of her own. Holding onto his ass with her little hands while he holds onto the arm rest for balance.

Soon...

YES! THAT'S IT! HUNH! THAT'S A HANH! GOOD GIRL!

MMMFFFLLL!!! GGGLLAKKE!!!

AAWW!! GOD I'M CO- I'M AAAHHHNNN!!!

SPLURT!!! SPLURT!! SPLURT!

frame 05
Wendy has her mouth open. Tongue out. cum is everywhere! A little is still splurting from the tip of Santa's Phallus. 

THAT'S A GOOD GIRL! LICK IT ALL UP. THEN BRING YOUR MOUTH TO ME.


When I finally get around to finishing this project It will probably look a lot different than what you see and read here but, it should still be a lot of fun!








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