Rough / Pencils of panel 2 from page 43

Looking good. Definitely a clearer vision of what I want. Coming soon is the full color version with the text. Also, coming soon, is previews of Urban Jointz Vol. 2 (finally)! If you haven't seen volume one (shame on you) and your looking for some of my adults only art, check it out here!

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Page 43 panel 2 thumbnail...

Erica & Her Stepfather Davíd Bueno...

Here is the thumbnail of the second panel. Really nice and loose. Just getting down the basic idea...
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Erotic Art: Final Art for Panel 1 of page 43

 Like the overall feel of this. Could of been darker in some areas and I could've added more of a background but, I was so focussed on the immediacy and intimacy between Davíd and Erica...

Well, it's off to the next panel as things get clearer story wise...

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Erotic Art: The rough pencils of panel 1 on page 43

Here is the rough pencils. I'm liking it so far and one thing though... That's not Davíd's knee!

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Erotic Art: First Panel of Page 43

Erica and her Daddy Davíd get even closer. More to come soon!

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Adult Comic: Complete page 42

Here is the completed page 42. Really trying to tell a story here and not just do the obvious. That way if anything should happen it will seem more of a natural progression than something completely unbelievable. Just because it's a story that involves sex doesn't mean a good story can't be told...

Anyway, enjoy and stay tuned for more!

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Erotic Art: Final Panel of Page 42

 Here Erica & her Daddy Davíd get a little closer. This one went pretty smoothly from thumbnail stage to finish.

 The only problem was the facial characteristics of Erica at the end didn't work for me. A part of me wants to change how she looks here but I like the piece so much overall... Plus I'm so behind.

More from page 42..

My apologies for taking so long to post. Had some technical difficulties the last few days but, now I'm back in business! 

 Here is the continuation of my previous post! In this one you can see the final pencils which I kept fairly  loose.

  Which is surprising for me because usually my final pencils are tighter. Anyway, enjoy until my next post!

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Erica Loves her Daddy...

Here is just the rough of panel 5 from page 42. Still lots of details to figure out. Lots of changes to make. I'll show you the finish soon. right now this rough is just focussing on the emotion of the moment...

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Panel 4 from page 42...

 And the story continues... This one was relatively simple and overall I'm satisfied with the final product. Still think the lighting could've been more dramatic. Hope Erica doesn't mind...

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Page 42 continued...

Here's another panel from page 42 continued from the previous post. Actually like this won more than the previous. Has a more raw feel.  

Another peek @ page 42...

Here's the finished look at that panel of Erica having trouble sleeping that I previously posted here... Came out pretty good although I was hoping for a more raw look. 

 I guess, from my perspective, it has too much of a clean look. Needs to be more messy... Anyway I've posted both versions (with and without text) here. Enjoy!

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And now a preview of page 43...

Well just the script in it's rough stages...

The Diary of Molly Fredrickson:  Peanut Butter Vol. 5

"Erica's Diary"

page 44

Like this...?

Hey, Erica, your mother just died I...

Does that mean I lose you too?

No... You'll always have me...

Then stay with me tonight Daddy... Love me like you used to... Cuando Mamá estaba aquí ...

Remember all the fun we used to have... Just us three. Mom used to cum so hard watching us fuck. I can feel her watching us now...

yeah...

So let's give her what she wants...

More to come soon!

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Here's a look at the rough script for page 43...

A lot changes between here and the final page but, consider this another way to look up Erica's dress...

The Diary of Molly Fredrickson:  Peanut Butter Vol. 5

"Erica's Diary"

page 43

1

~Why didn't I think of that before? If there is anyone that can put my Father in his place it's his twin brother Arturo! Daddy also told me about how he changed his flight back to LA. He's staying for the week now and leaving next weekend. He's going to also try to get a transfer back to New York and be a correctional officer over here! There was only one thing...~

2

But, what about Helen?

What do you mean? I'm sure she'll be all right. She's got College, work... 

3

Yeah but, she's going to miss you.

Aww she's a big girl now. She can take care of herself.

4

No... You don't understand. Helen is going to miss you.

Wha—what... No entiendo.

Nevermind... ~Mamá, I wanted to tell him but, it really isn't for me to tell... I guess I feel the same way about it as you.~ 

Thank you for going to all this trouble for me... Your so good to me Daddy. I wish you where my father instead of that asshole...

5

Hey... I don't know abou that... There's certain things we do that a father and daughter shouldn't be doing...

Yeah, well... 

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Even More from Peanut Butter Vol. 3!

Here is the actual page where Erica shows up and she's not a figment of Molly's wild imagination! You can see the original pencils for her first appearance on this page here on Ebay. Love how the cellphone came out! The screensaver bit and how it gives a nod all the way back to Vol. 1. is fun. 

  

More from Peanut Butter Vol. 3

Here's a little more from Peanut Butter Vol. 3...

One of the problems that I've had regularly is keeping the look of my characters stay consistent. Especially Molly Fredrickson. To this day, I'm still going back and forth on exactly how she should look. I plan to create a model sheet for all of my characters, or at least the major ones sometime between Vol. 5 & 6. Or maybe I can do that as I go along... 

Anyway, here we have Molly taking a shower. Trying to cool down after being "teased" by her Professor and a mysterious fellow student... Of course her thoughts go back to Erica Cardinale...

I'll post up some more of these pages shortly. Check out the related piece on sale at Ebay. Enjoy!

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A Little Look @ Peanut Butter Vol. 3

Since I'm posting a piece from "The Diary of Molly Fredrickson:  Peanut Butte Vol. 3" on Ebay I thought I'd post some of the related pages... 

This was my first book in color and I've got to admit that I didn't have any clue as to what I was doing.  Thanks goes out to Christian Zanier for leading me in the right direction. 

Another problem was the story itself! The first two volumes were with Erica & Molly. Even though Molly was and is the star of this book, Erica Cardinale tended to be that driving force that Molly responded to. 

Now Molly was alone in college. Would she be willing and brave enough to have the kind of fun that she had with Erica in the previous books? 

How would she handle the complexities of College by herself? How would she be able to meet people? The right kind of people?

Anyway, check these pages out. I'll post some more from this chapter soon!

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